The youtube video is so awesome! you can definitely see the time and effort you put into it. My only suggestion would be may leave the slides with the text up a bit longer, it's kind of hard to read it when it's moving so fast. -Also the clothes on the bed are really effective, gives the illusion of a person who's sunk into the covers
I love the video! I agree, I think it would be helpful if the text were up a bit longer. The one with the pens looks cool, but it's a bit dark, I think. You should play with the exposure and try to brighten it up. Also, it would be interesting to play with the saturation in the colors of the pens.
- I really enjoy the film! you did a great job at putting it together. -for the book ones, i would maybe up the contrast, or distort it in some way to make it more interesting. -The light one is really intriguing. You could try cropping somewhere so it's not directly in the center.
The youtube video is so awesome! you can definitely see the time and effort you put into it. My only suggestion would be may leave the slides with the text up a bit longer, it's kind of hard to read it when it's moving so fast.
ReplyDelete-Also the clothes on the bed are really effective, gives the illusion of a person who's sunk into the covers
I love the video! I agree, I think it would be helpful if the text were up a bit longer. The one with the pens looks cool, but it's a bit dark, I think. You should play with the exposure and try to brighten it up. Also, it would be interesting to play with the saturation in the colors of the pens.
ReplyDelete- I really enjoy the film! you did a great job at putting it together.
ReplyDelete-for the book ones, i would maybe up the contrast, or distort it in some way to make it more interesting.
-The light one is really intriguing. You could try cropping somewhere so it's not directly in the center.